Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain it’s intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
(首句：引出图画)Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: (图画细节：人/物+动作+环境+文字) on a lake stands a young guy, waiting anxiously for the fish to bite; however, beside this guy sits another his partner, enjoying beautiful music, food and the pleasure of fishing. (文字信息) Finally, we can also notice that there are several Chinese characters, which say that “Frequently, we focus too much eyesight on results, ignoring the joy in process.”
(首句：图画联系主旨)Such a scenario can be naturally associated with the people’s different attitudes towards life. (二句：背景) The contemporary society is best characterized by fierce competition and wide opportunities. (三句：图画所反映的客观现象) However, a host of people lose their patience or become too anxious in their pursuit of success. (万能关注) This trend is particularly worth concern.(强调句式：好事写肯定;坏事写否定) It is their negative attitudes that do not enable them to build up hope, confidence and courage to face difficulties in life. (to enjoy/ appreciate the pleasure/ happiness/ meaning of pursuing success).
(本句可省略不写，，将二三段合并成为一段。如果写的话，写成设问)Then, what is success? To my understanding, it can be likened to a road, which is full of difficulties and beauties. (意义：排比= 主语+brings…, +arouses…, and helps …) Enjoying the processbrings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for life and helps us to succeed.
(总体评论)Accordingly, it is of great necessity to inspire this awareness. (建议一：营造社会氛围)For one thing, the society as a whole should forge a wholesome atmosphere to accept, appreciate and advocate optimistic attitudes towards life. (建议二：年轻人提升自己)For another, it is advisable for youngsters to strengthen/ enhance themselves by studying hard and enjoying the process of growing.
1. 求职: 申请成为一名音乐老师。
I am a senior from Peking University who is exceedingly interested in the post of music teacher in your organization.(I am writing for the purpose of applying for this job.)
During the past 3 years, I focused much eyesight and interest on my major--music, and it is my hard work that enables me to build up enoughability and knowledge. In addition, compared with others, I have much richer experience of teaching, because I have worked as a part-time teacher in a famous training organization. Finally, my hobbies include dancing, sports, traveling and reading. Accordingly, I am convinced that I can be a qualifiedteacher.
Please consider my sincere application and look forward to your favorable reply.
I am a professor from Department of Arts at Peking University. And today I am writing for the purpose of recommending one of my students, Li Ming, for the job of music teacher in your organization.